35. Some people enjoy extreme sports like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. What are your views on them?
This issue raises a controversy about extreme sports. The point of contention calls for it is analysis by various perspectives. However, it is evident that practice extreme sports are totally dangerous.
At the outset, there are several reasons why it can be stated that practice sports as bungee jumping, skiing, climb mountain, diving is dangerous, and people could suffer serious injuries.
The first being is that practicing extreme sports people could suffer injuries and not back to have a normal life. Furthermore, a critical element of this is the people that practice extreme sports sometimes just wants to appear and social media and post photos for his friend, because they need feel that they are better than the others, when they practice this type of sports. To cite an example on the matter a famous F1 race pilot suffer a skiing accident and he keeps in coma since 2013.
On the other hand, some people adopt an opposite view and tend to believe that they need feel adrenaline to be happy. Correspondingly, it is a crucial note that people that practice extreme sports like shows for other friends and families that they are overcoming our own limits.
Moreover, this idea is well supported by the fact that famous people like show us that they like do different things because they want to appear more than the others. Thus, a clear example of this in practice is if you verify the Instagram page from Neymar soccer player you can see videos that He is diving with white sharks.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that practice extreme sports are totally crazy attitude. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01016949153 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50153873933 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7685411098 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219905743918 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085195412739 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589658980418 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118771043988 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399996093542 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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