4)A county becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a
mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A country becomes more developed and grown when its population is a mixture of nationalities, I
totally agree with this statement to an extent that multi-cultural societies are what bring a still
moment of pride and honour and understanding of different cultures for better prosperity stability and
harmony. I would like to explain it further in the following paragraphs.
A culturally ethical and diverse country brings together its people through celebrations of the festival
enriching their cultural backgrounds, educating youth about their country and background, and getting a
taste of what each culture taste with its different cuisines for example: - Youngsters across India are
right now so focused on Korean and Chinese cultural cuisines and movies and series. Across India
it’s just so many widespread ethnicity and exotic flavors available for personal preferences.
A multi-cultural society has a lot of benefits, such as economically, socially, and logistically with the help
of immigrants as more numbers of engineer’s specialized doctors and well trained skilled and
developed people bringing an inflow of expertise, development, and dynamism with key factors
which are the underlined influence for e.g. competitiveness, efficiency, and productivity.
To reiterate, the importance of local and global traditions and customs brings people together, and help them to
collaborate, co-operate and live harmonically with a rich blend of tolerance and an open mind towards
religion and lifestyle.
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- Some people say that a child can develop on its own others say that teachers and parents have crucial role Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- some people say that child can develop on their own others say parents and teachers have crucial role discuss both viwes and give your opininon 61
- Research has shown that the transportation of products and people is the main source of pollution Some people believe the government should be in charge of this while others believe it is the fault of individuals Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Many people put their personal information online address telephone number and so on for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking Is this a positive or negative development 61
- Television advertising directed to children age 2 to 5 should not be allowed 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., if, so, still, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82666666667 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27372931471 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657777777778 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.670629759 50.4703680194 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.5 104.977214359 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.5 20.9669160288 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.12807881773 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133346410799 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600138087462 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929208010031 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439563891844 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960209656364 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 12.6369458128 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 53.1260098522 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.9458128079 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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