Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
These days there has been a colossal upsurge in design of building whether it is a positive impact or negative on people’s work and life. Some people believe that having an apropos design is always a positive impact while other argue that it is a negative impact on people’s life and work. This essay will discuss how a good design is always upsurge outcome on people’s lifestyle and work.
A good design is a pleasant and greener place of environment. People working in this structure are always healthy/active during work side and more over positive outcomes to the company. For example, in our city many large companies/buildings have appropriate design for which people working in that atmosphere are active and enjoy work at all time. Clearly, having an outdo in design of the buildings is always the merits on the life and people they work in this vicinity.
Moreover, a good design is always considered with all sorts of safety and ventilated system provided with many windows surroundings for clean intake of sunlight and air which maintain healthy atmosphere. For example, a google company where thousands of employers are working in this environment system are always benefited of getting fresh intake air and vitamin-d because of this their heath is benefited.
This essay has discussed how people’s life and work together gained from having a good and apropos design. In my opinion it is always outstanding and preponderant facets to work in a design building which alleviate from work pressure and maintains the long life expectancy.
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Whether design of buildings
Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
In today’s world there has been an increase in design of high rise buildings, which become the impact that do this designs resulted a good impact or a bad. Some people believe that having a good design is better and safer place to work, while others argue that a design it is perfect or imperfect life can move on. This essay will discuss how imperative is to have a good structure of the building and ways it will have a positive impact on people life and work vicinity.
At some point, design played a crucial role in the people life provided with all comfort, as such not only it has benefited but also good work environment also keeps them to work actively and catalyze for outdo of the company. For example, in my country India, many high-rise skyscrapers with apropos design had a positive impact on foreign companies for which this companies collaborated by commencing the business. Clearly having a better design is always a good impact on the life of people and company outcomes.
Moreover, an apropos design is always a safest place to work, which is a peach of mind, accentuate on work without worries. For example, in most of the countries, a suitable design is considered catalyze with all safety systems, fire protection panels(FPS), automatic doors opening system (ADP) which is a protection tool part of having a good design. Clearly, having the outdo in design of building is the positive secure impact on people’s life.
This essay has discussed having good design of building is always a positive impact on work and healthy life. In my opinion, government shall look both on good design of buildings but upkeep the older building for better of the country.
Advancement in medical
Advancement in medical technology has increased average life expectancy. Is it a curse or a blessing?
In recent years there has been a colossal upsurge that the increase in life expectancy is because of advancement in medical technology. Some people believe that increase in life expectancy of older people is a blessing, while other argue that it is a curse to the nation. This essay will discuss how increase in life expectancy of old aged people is a blessing.
The preponderance in medical technology has played a crucial role in life expectancy of old age people, firstly, they not only taught us to tackled the difficult situations but also our families were blessed. For example, in our country most of the ministers were at the very old age and standing with years of experience at one position and had resulted a good posture to the country for which many families and houses, and nations are benefited. Clearly, thanks to the advancement in the medical technology.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelmed the potential benefits of increasing in the life expectancy of old age people. The primary concern stems from the fact that aged people are always affected by diseases and need regular medications. For instance, in my country, old age people who are battling with medications are enormous in the cost of the drugs for which the Government is paying on pensions and other expenses. As a result, increased in life expectancy turn out to be negative impact (curse).
This essay has discussed how advancement in the medical technology has increased the life expectancy of older people. In my opinion, the increased in average life expectancy of older aged people is always a blessing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91183897707 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6249786325 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941855708548 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472870208358 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249416997537 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637175749974 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246260510344 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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