Of all the Fortune 500 companies, only 4% have female CEOs. The government should change policy so that women make up and equal 50% of executive business positions.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, number of men who handle the executive business positions is extremely larger than the number of women. Some people believe that governments should legislate new laws which impose companies to hire more women, while others argue that women capabilities differ than men, and they could not do males jobs. This essay will discuss the reasons why the government should impose companies to hire more women at the executive business positions similar to the number of men.
Number of women occupies the executive business positions should equal to the number of men because women show their competent skills to the men. Women own knowledge and experiences which enable them to do men jobs. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge University, has shown that 86% of women do their tasks better than men, hence they own the right to lead big companies. Therefore, it seems clear that women must have the right to be assigned at the executive business positions.
Secondary, the increasing number of women in the world should impose the governments to change some policies regarding the higher position jobs. Women number is greater than the number of men, so they eligible to be assigned at executive business positions. Recent research, which was conducted at the Jordan University of Science and Technology, has found the number of females is dramatically increasing, which will be doubled in the 22nd century. Thus, women should own the right to lead companies and the government should impose companies to hire more women.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why government shall impose new laws that impose company to hire more women at the higher positions. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the number of women who work at companies should equal to the number of men.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5488845962 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426229508197 0.580463131201 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7947489747 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227957124585 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10741887235 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513329110892 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162986764457 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378436290941 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.