Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basic produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is an ongoing debate among intellectuals regarding the pros and cons of trade in countries. In this regard, protagonists assert that trade in different countries make their relationships strong whereas antagonists censure this notion. They profess that transportation of goods from other countries put bad effects on nation. All the sides of this contention will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs to deduce the reasonable outcome.
People who opine that transportation of things is good for nation substantiate their points by citing that it increase the global trade. Firstly, by trading fruits and vegetables people can taste variety of items that make them connected to other nations. For example, people can eat food of other countries in own home without visiting that nation, however, they can understand the tradition of that country by eating their food. Secondly, it provide employment to the people in transportation field. It not only provide money to workers but also increase the economy of nation.
However, there is another group of people who profess that international trade have harm effect on the country. They support their logic by saying that it cause pollution in the environment. To prove my point, when goods are transported from the road or air path the vehicles used by companies emit gases that badly effect the environment. Trade of goods also influence the culture of nations. it is reported by the media that traditional foods are becoming less popular because of some international foods.
At the end recapitulating whole discussion, it is conceded by me that there are some disadvantages of transportation goods from one country to another that can be reduced by own actions of human.
- It is suugested that everyone wants to have a car electricity, and a fridge. Do disadvantage of this development for society outweigh advantage? 85
- Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basic produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25539568345 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93728109074 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1713097612 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119529890002 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400359504671 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352391832082 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747338724788 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143423150963 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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