It is suugested that everyone wants to have a car electricity, and a fridge. Do disadvantage of this development for society outweigh advantage?
There is an ongoing debate among intellectuals regarding the uses of new technological devices. In this regard, umpteen protagonists assert that cars and electricity is necessary for everyone whereas antagonists censure this notion. They profess that new inventions can cause many problems. All the sides of this contention will be discussed in upcoming paragraph in order to deduce the reasonable outcome.
People who opine that electricity and cars are important to people substantiate their points by citing that these have become preponderant part of life. Firstly, cars make the life easy. By use of cars individuals can travel anywhere in less time and according to need. Secondly, without electricity no work can be done in today's life. To prove my point, all the essential works in office and home are done by new gadgets that can start on electricity. Moreover, fridge may decline the wastage of food and also can be used to storage of medicines. Therefore, it is asserted that these are inevitable of daily living.
However, there is another group of people who profess that these things have negative effects on humans. First, excessive use of cars can harmfully effect the environment. For example, gas emission from cars is one of the main reason of global warming. Second, use of refrigerator and electricity make the person lazy and more prone to diseases. These are the reasons they believe that new inventions can adversely affect the humankind.
At the end recapitulating the whole discussion, it is conceded by me that there are some negatives of utilizing new gadgets but it can be reduced by own efforts of human.
- It is suugested that everyone wants to have a car electricity, and a fridge. Do disadvantage of this development for society outweigh advantage? 85
- Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basic produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss time and according to need. Secondly, without electricity no work can be done ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11152416357 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83026365175 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9592672758 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8823529412 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112300404903 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357037445368 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475309161757 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640213690845 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423330130182 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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