Belching and unauthorised behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices How far you support this view Give your response with justification

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Belching and unauthorised behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices. How far you support this view? Give your response with justification.

Submitted by jenifer on Tue, 06/16/2020 - 11:21

These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that burbing and abnormal behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices, while it is possible to claim that it is good to develope a good work environment. My view is that disadvantage outweigh advantage. In this essay, I shall explain about my view point by analyzing bothsides of the argument.

There are several reasons why it is not acceptable in work place. One of them is that it gives a unpleasant environment to work. It can also be argued that it will spoil the mood of the employee so full contribution in task can be affected. Recent research by AIIMS Doctors shows that burbling and bloating cause a person to contribute less in his workplace.

Those who argue that it is natural processes of human being have a different view and say that it is normal functioning of our body. Secondly, if burbling or bloating is considered as unauthorized behavior then people will be affected with so many diseases by controlling it. Recent research which is published in International journal stated that many young adult landed up in hemorrhoids due to over controlling of bloating and another study showed that controlling of belching leads to gastric cancer.

To conclude, while there is strong arguments on both sides of the case, my view is that we can not restrict normal human body function in our workplace instead we can give privacy to do that. I would strongly recommend that people should change the way they think about our body function.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'there are strong arguments'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88715953307 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77317552739 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1552288057 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101377635264 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341888562288 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294703871329 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571624445996 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419028426387 0.0609392437508 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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