Cars and planes have become a significant part of modern life. What is your opinion?

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Cars and planes have become a significant part of modern life. What is your opinion?

The importance of cars and planes which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject of this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the pivotal impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my view for favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the mot important one stems from fact of this trend is that cars and planes to makes the journey is easy and also we can go any time anywhere with the help of cars because cars have no effort to drive any weather. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that planes are make the travel is short and also made the world a global village. Needless to say, that all these merits stand in a good stead.

Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits of this trend but one of the most crucial is that automobile and aviation industry create employment opportunities for thousands of people. Hence, apparent it is why many are favor in this trend.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of cars and planes are indeed too great to ignore

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...f this trend is that cars and planes to makes the journey is easy and also we can go ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81276595745 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53037321202 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5102955111 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11461892691 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420699451556 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474631649833 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686639059101 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418623385817 0.0609392437508 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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