Students with degree earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion?
The importance of paying the full cost of courses to earn high salaries, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of people with degrees has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the economic industry in recent years. it can be agreed that going to university to get better education has some positive impacts, but some people claim that not having academic qualification has some negative impacts as well. this essay will elaborate how students with degrees can get better jobs and how paying the cost of the courses brings better pay from business and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the out set, there are numerable reasons why students receive higher salary, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that to be prepared get benefits to companies. For instance, people having education, are better prepared to get the job. studying at university, therefore, can play a vital role for industries having people prepared to do the job.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that people with no education earning same money as people with degrees is also significant for companies as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most predominant one lies from the fact that humans would give up studies. paying same to people with education and not education, hence can play a vital role for universities in the future.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of higher salary to students with degrees is prominent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09885931559 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66293828233 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0403252024 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211528515163 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851390417641 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352643507658 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12349607783 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477533619218 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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