In many countries, students take a year off after finishing school. Should students take a gap year before attending university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
The importance of take a year off after finishing school which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject of this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my view favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most important one stems from the fact that they learn different s cultures and gather funds for their study and also gain work experience. Moreover, they learn different languages. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that students take exposure of the outside world which makes independent. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming one is that they are lose our confidence and also they might fall into bad company. Moreover, it is difficult to adapt after such a long gap. Hence, it is apparent why many are in against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of take a year off after finishing school are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lost'.
Suggestion: lost
... the most alarming one is that they are lose our confidence and also they might fall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12252964427 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68129893814 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8342447318 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276146485774 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870545691409 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830412049027 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157721824622 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563474413113 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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