Cheating and lying are sometimes acceptable. Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on cheating and lying. Some people argue in favour of cheating, but some are totally against that phenomenon. On my point of view, I do not accept cheating, because it gives more adverse affects on the society. In this essay, I shall discuss matters in order to strengthen my argument while analyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, there are myriad of disadvantages in cheating to the society such as breach of trust among people. For instance, if the trust is breached there will be weak relationships among people, which would create grudges and chaotic situations as well. In addition, people do not prefer to be cheated by others and this is more critical in business realationships in long run.
On the other hand, there are advantages in some occasions to the society. For example, sometimes people lie to their children to make them avoid some activities or situations, but once they get to know the truth they might not keep trust on their parents as well. However, if parents lie there is a possibility of their children cheat and lie on other people by making it as a habit.
In conclusion, it is recommended to be trustworthy in majority of the situations, because it is hard to repair the relationships once they are breached. It is also believed that the parents and teachers play a pivotol role in cultivating good values on childrens mind from the childhood.Finally, according to my experiences, the goodwill achieved through trustworthiness is valuable for individuals and organizations in long run as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95185185185 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00782016872 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1701282902 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842844045277 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031273137279 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253594774993 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480297872286 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183833249239 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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