moving from rural areas to big cities will provide more opportunities.Discuss your opinion.
In this modern era, people prefer to live in big cities than living in rural areas. While some people argue that disadvantages in living in big cities over weigh the advantages of living in big cities, on my point of view people should move to big cities if they have the opportunity to do so. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my argument while discussing both the aspects.
First and foremost, people can experience myriad of advantages in living in big cities such as more availability, confidentiality, security and convenience. For example, people can access to almost all the facilities in a few minutes while saving their time and money which could be used for another purpose. In addition, people have more job opportunities in big cities compared to rural areas. Therefore, it is recommended people to shift to big cities because of the quality of infrastructure available in these cities.
On the other hand, some people argue that rural areas are preferable considering the congestion and pollution factors in the cities. For instance, Beijing city of China and New Delhi of India is considered as the most air polluted cities on earth irrespective of the facilities available in there. However, those who engage in agricultural production have to live in rural areas considering the nature of their livelihood, other than that retired people can also live in these areas because it is good for their physical and mental well-being.
In conclusion, it is believed that governments should improve the infrastructure countrywide to eliminate the discrimination of city and rural areas. Besides that, governments can promote eco-tourism in rural areas because in modern world most of the people prefer travelling in countryside.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21754385965 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01724600733 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0450391892 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.25397266985 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225234690508 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969024927886 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484224890654 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142606726434 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333720948495 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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