After 1970, animal rights has been the matter of much arguments among people. Although the existence of the zoo regarded as thoroughly helping and positive for our animals by many of people, there are a number of people claim that zoo is hurting animals. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with picking up the zoos.
To begin with, there are various reasons to disagree the zoo and why it should be banned. At first, although by visiting the zoo children can learn about animals, the zoo actually get the right to freedom from animals. they change their habits if they lose natural habitat. For example, they rely on humans to feed and they lose their skill to finding food if they return to their territory.
In addition, while the zoo can help to some part of science such as zoology and ecology, but it has built due to business and financial reasons. the zoo owners gather the animals from around the world to increase their profitability. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by NMB University researchers in 2015 shows that a significant number of animal hunting occur due to selling to exhibit in the zoo.
In conclusion, while zoo regarded as a entertainment and agreed by many people, my personal sentiment is that it forecloses the freedom of animal. moreover, it can be harmful to animal's health.
- Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.'Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 72
- some people believe that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. Do you agree or disagree? 80
- Universities should reduce tuition fees, university education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- A company’s higher level authorities should get their employees’ inputs during decision-making processes. Discuss. Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 88
- Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7735042735 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54374037441 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3636912892 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280139570047 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102313716441 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722645523509 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166473992581 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596413791258 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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