Laws can change people’s behavior. Do you agree o
In this days, There is an opinion that law establishment could change the behavior of people. Although this statement dismissed by some individuals and regarded as a severe act, I think law establishment have positive effects on societies. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this topic.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the law to change people's behavior positively. At first, Although there is always some loophole to abuse of law, it could be useful for all societies. The law establishment could reduce crime rates in any country. For example, in many countries stopped some crimes such as theft and killing, after prohibiting the carrying of weapons.
In addition, while doing some activities in different fields like business become hard with existing of law, it makes all works in business, industries, and techniques, safer and more confident. Law allowed to different punishment for lawbreakers to improve their behaviors. For instance, a scientific research conducted by TMV University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of criminals never returned to their previous acts after passing the period of punishment in prison.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about law and some people believe extremely make their living hard, my personal sentiment is that it has many advantages to social cohesion.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31531531532 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87388799454 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63963963964 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.140465084 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194421123065 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797268208197 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767922839627 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109086152334 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375728529243 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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