Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss the positive and negative impacts of this change?
In recent days the hot topic is going throughout the country, is about communication. And it is dramatically changed in the past 10 years of life. Because of modern technology is growing faster and faster in the new generation period. we will discuss deeply in the below paragraph.
First, technology has grown and there are many innovative applications where build up our communication skills. In past decades, there are no other features to communicate with other people yet there is a restriction to communicate with strangers. but, in recent days, technology gives much application to communicate with new people's by using facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp and so on by this application we can communicate easily whenever and wherever the person is. And it gives a positive impact on the people.
but, In every aspect, there are negative impacts also. By the way, in these new technologies, there are demerits. For instance, I had recently seen the news on television that a person was kidnapped and ask his parents to bring money and it was investigated by police that he was a trap by using facebook as a tool. so, we should be careful by using modern technologies with new peoples.
To sum up with, In every part of new technology had merits and demerits. By knowing this only we are using application so, we must be careful while communicating with unknown peoples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for instance, by the way, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07359307359 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96840303491 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6804479085 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151908019986 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570955512497 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635331116122 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822801038329 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382078765853 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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