Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don’t need. Give your opinion about this practice?
Of late there has been a colosal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that advertisements strategies play a vital role to influence buyers for some useless products. I, personally believe that this argument is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the basic reasons behind these strategies before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the advertising campaigns adapted by companies to grab maximum of customers. Firstly, the conspicuous one stem from the fact that these campaigns are actually meant to notify customers for about the product. However, these strategies are used to influence general pubic for maximum attention. As, a prime example, these days cosmetic brands are paying huge amount to celebrities and bloggers to advertise their products in such away, to attract followers of them.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that promotions and deals on some products are more effective way to present n unusual or unnecessary products. Therefore, people are attracted for these buy one get one free product, which are sometimes useless for them.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that advertisement is not only influence people to buy unnecessary things but also it promotes these strategies to grab public attention. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49777777778 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87619776445 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1522068938 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.454545455 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162731015482 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579948931756 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434998666612 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970381550139 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192010548606 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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