Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don’t need. Give your opinion about this practice.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals the importance of advertisement for peoples has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. I strongly agree with the idea that people buy the things which they do not need.
To began with the effects of the advertisement on the peoples. Firstly, the people see the discount of advertisements on television and banners in streets and on the walls. Then the people buy the unneeded things due to the discount. People do not think about that they do not need these types of things which also have. Secondly people buy the products because their favorite celebrity gives the advertisement of product. People buy the product and they do not get any profit. Like now a day’s mostly the advertisement give by the celebrities and they give advertisement only for the money they earn money from the advertisement. People think that the advertisement is given by the famous person so it is good and people buy the products. There are so many fake companies who give the advertisement for become famous
In conclusion we can say that the companies give the advertisements for influence peoples to buy the products which they also have. And people buy the products due to the discount. Sometimes people buy the products because their favorite celebrities do work in the advertisement. It is necessary for the celebrities that firstly they know about the product either it is real or fake.
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...give the advertisement for become famous In conclusion we can say that the compan...
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...he product either it is real or fake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94296577947 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92116189764 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463878326996 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0962746521 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377619974266 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140430265875 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722156480325 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268003703329 0.151781067708 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684791841821 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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