Computer technology
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is to see the colossal upsurge in the use of Computer Technology. Some people contend that this is a boon to mankind. Others reject this notion argue that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in society. This essay will further elaborate both sides with the examples and lead to a plausible conclusion.
On the one hand, one may point out that one of the most significant benefits of computer technology is the availability of extra time. For example, mother, unlike in the past, now have more time to spend with their families, thanks to efficient computerised household machinery. Also, the international organisation is now taking a great initiative in educating its citizens about the benefits of computer technology. Citizens are spending their quality time in learning the new computer technologies in order to meet a career aim and ultimately the prosperity.
On the other hand, there is a deluge of arguments in favour of people who hold the opposite view. One of the most preponderant ones is that computer dependency has negative consequences for the community in various ways. Firstly, people are losing jobs because machines are increasingly taking over the roles of humans, such as in the car manufacturing sector. According to 'Times Magazines January 2013 edition', Americans employed in manufacturing has dropped from 30 percent to 10 percent today. Secondly, many of the young population has lost enthusiasm because of technological dependency, hence people are becoming shiftless and less efficient.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my personal sentiment is that the benefits of computer technology far outweigh its drawbacks.
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- computer technology 85
- computer technology 85
- Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society How far do you agree with this statement Support your views with reasons and or examples from your own experience 85
- Computer technology 85
- Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'time'.
Suggestion: Time
... car manufacturing sector. According to Times Magazines January 2013 edition, America...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28315412186 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00711933009 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.811225845 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28023227298 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853294238944 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098079424813 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17227566971 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920104708035 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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