Working from home using computer technology is developing in numerous countries and is believed to be normal for most office workers in the coming time. How would you think society will be influenced by the development of working from home?
This is a technical era; with the help of technology advances we can see the various types of developments in every sector. Now-a-days, by using computer technology, the work is easy to do at home. Some people reckon that it will become normal for almost every office to work at home in coming days. According to my perspective, the community will be affected by various aspects. So, I will try to explain in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with the benefits of working at home, firstly, if it is possible to everyone to do work at home then it will be more benefited for the community because the expense of transportation will be saved and the traffic will be decreased. For example, if all people stay at home and do work at home then the fuel which used on travelling will be protected, moreover the traffic congestions and the pollution will be reduced.
On the contrary, the some drawbacks of working at home such as there will be no respect of their superiority so it is effect on the branch heads. For instance, if a person goes to office only for meeting then there is no value of the seniors and the worker cannot enjoy the environment of the office.
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58373205742 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72118854633 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4840193722 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357940675191 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149132724407 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798102545136 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243475086543 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518295917619 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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