working from home w home using computer technology is developing in numerous countries and it is believed to be normal for most office workers in the coming time. how would you think society will be influenced by the development of working from home
Computer has influenced our life largely in recent years. There is an increasing trend of accomplishing the work from home and it is considered normal for majority of office employees in the future. This essay will discuss the reasons why the rising trend of performing the task from home is in fact has both positive and negative effects on society.
To begin with, doing the job from home has many disadvantages for society. Firstly, it will harm the foundation stone of society that is social togetherness. When people start to do the job at home without visiting the office, they will be socially isolated which in turn cause harm to the basic structure of society. Furthermore, this trend will also make people less disciplined. The flexibility to do the work at any hour of the day will make a person less punctual that not only lessen the number of ideal citizens in society but also cause harm to their own health. A recent study, such as, has shown that people who prefer home based jobs are less disciplined and suffer from more health issues than those who do jobs in offices or companies. As a result, there is no reason to deny that home based employment affected the society in a harmful way.
On the other hand, by working from home people can save a lot of time, the most precious element in contemporary world, which they otherwise waste in commuting and use that time more productively and efficiently.
To close, the facility of doing the job while staying at home with computer technology affected the society in both ways. In my opinion, disadvantages of home based employment outweighs its advantages, thus affected the society in harmful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81597222222 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62488747187 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7178591603 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319461604728 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114099495129 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06084740143 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19794585763 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386768671965 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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