Computer technology has had more negative than positive impacts in a society? How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and / or examples from your own experiences?
The tremendous advancements in computer technology has both positive and negative effects on a society. Some people think that computers act as a good omen and flourish the society, while others maintain computers as harmful tool for individuals. This essay will discuss why computers have more positive than negative impacts in a society.
Firstly, the exponential growth in computer technology has rendered its use as very common. With the advent of computers, a paradigm shift has resulted in the working environment of tedious and hectic record keeping jobs. For instance, difficult and time consuming computing jobs in banks and record keeping in hospitals are now being efficiently done by computers. Therefore, it is unquestionable to argue that the common use of computers in the society might have any bad effects.
On the other hand, the availability of this evil technology at the hand of every commoner and at homes might lead young one’s and an individual to spend and waste a lot of time. As an example, kids would become so involved with this technology and subsequently lack in their educational activities. Not only wastage of time but also this evil technology can lead to numerous crimes like cyber-crime and hacking which would disturb the balance of peace within the society. As a matter of fact, such situations would undoubtedly entail negative impacts on the community.
To conclude, the use of computer technology has both pros and cons but I am of the opinion that this technology used in right manner can prosper and bear positive results in a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13846153846 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8528922312 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7053342574 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201826524477 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785397466328 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534189669871 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119236732993 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386672608529 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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