Countries are faced decreasing the birth rate and increasing ageing population. What do you think are the causes and effects of this?
Some people believe that countries are facing with decreasing the birth rate and increasing ageing population, while others believe that ageing population is not necessarily bad. As far as my idea concern, I believe that the causes and effects of this phenomena should be considered.
From a social point of view, health insurance is indeed bound to medical advances, which means it might lead to both new drugs and new treatments. For instance, a group of reputable scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between financial issues and frail people as well as fighting with diseases. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that changing lifestyles is not only correlated with pensioners but also fertility problems.
Moreover, in political terms, sweeping changes in societies is undoubtedly attributable to lacking of workforce, in that it would lead to famine, poverty and debts. A well-known example of such attributions is, which is cause concern since it had been mistaken in taking living the life for granted, Had it lived healthy in advance, it might have had the opportunity to live longer. Thus, medical researchers could play a significant role in life spans.
To recapitulate, I believe that something must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislations and individuals hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... believe that the causes and effects of this phenomena should be considered. From ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50854700855 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07601185463 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683760683761 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1466848356 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.9 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150060879663 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508226045772 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994182955317 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949211406453 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145517800698 0.0609392437508 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.