Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Some people believe that laws change human behavior, while others believe the opposite. In modern society laws play a crucial role and they should be used as a mean to control a society. I entirely agree that laws can change human behavior and lifestyle.
From a social point of view, legislation is indeed bound to rules, which means it might lead to both breach of the laws and imposing rules. For instance, a group of scientist conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between paying taxes and fraud as well as minor crimes. Therefore, this evidence thus far support the contention that behaving differently correlated with not only behaving accordingly but also safer societies.
Moreover, in scientific terms, better living place is undoubtedly attributable to breaking. A well-known example of such attribution is lifestyle, paying bills and sweeping changes which is cause for concern that it had been mistaken in taking rules modern society for granted. Had it lived in the criminal society, it might have had the opportunity to do minor crimes. Thus, laws could play a significant role in safety.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that laws can change human behavior. However, as every garden may have some weeds, local authorities are recommended to enforce some strain legislation and individuals hoped to heighten their intellect.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30275229358 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84671374451 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2699656967 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34978149713 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131800278132 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170584653715 0.071462118173 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207512479147 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172311200993 0.0609392437508 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.