As countries developed , there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does it happend ? How does this affect our society ?
Nowadays, In the world, the treand is going towards in smaller family sizes. There are some cautions which are happen that situation. Moreover, what situations are affecting directly in our society for that reasons. I will discuss both situations in my further paragraphs.
First of all, it is most imprtant reason that there is urbanising in the world because people have to move in other regional areas and villages for implation. In addition,
every people want to live better life style so when those families have nulear sizes, they can live a good standard of living. Moreover, most of people do jobs and business so they have no enough time to spend with their love ones. For example, sometimes people have to go to work for long distance and sometimes the working hours more than eight hours in companies. Because of these reasons it is hard to spend with family time and so on it is directly effect on family size.
Moreover, as mentioned above cautions are affect on people’s psychological mind such as when your family sizes are less it means your burden and tensions are decrease for future planning. Moreover, the small family size means family could be healthy and wealthy with happiness. Further more, in the smaller family size, all members easily take care to each other. For instance, suppose to a family have one child so they can give full concentrate on his or her education and growth for over all development but it may be there are two or more than two children in the family so of course parents sometime cannot concentrate on every child for their further progress.
In conclusion, there are several reasons which I mentioned earlier in my point views which are reasons for smaller family sizes and it is affecting in family members.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88778877888 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46579051498 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.458044954 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13317320364 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564795861616 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568740352991 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834081216479 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576688144129 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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