In last 20 years, these have been a significant development in field of Information Technology. For example, The World Wild Web and communication by E-mail, however, this developments of IT is likely to have more negative effects than positive in future.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern era, the world has been changed by Information Technology in last two decades. It is used in communication and web browsing systems. However, these systems will may be more drawbacks than benefits in the future. I disagree with that statement so I will explain my points in further paragraphs.
At the outset, there are prolific advantages in the Information Technology. Definetely, In the world, almost all sector are being operated by Information technology because it makes system faster, easier and safely with high efficience, Moreover, it also plays vital role on communication too. So, it can not only connect two cities or nations but also connect nations. Because of this reason, most of individuals can connect with their friends and relatives who lives corner of the world. This Information technology has made all things smart so people have to become smarter for survive in the world.
Moreover, day by day, the information technology’s systems are upgrading with new features and models. Definitely, in the future, that technology will be different then now. I heard from someone that the very necessary substance are fuels not enough in the earth for future generation but through Information Technology system would be very effective where this technology will take place instead of fuels.
On the flip side, although there are very beneficial in Information Technology but some drawbacks hide behind the benefits. Firstly, in future that technology will be costly and a common man will cannot effort this technology. Secondly, it is reality that, now, using the harmful rays in technology which are affecting on human’s body and these harmful rays would be more dangerous in the future technology.
To recapitulate, people know that every coin has two sides, so we will have to decide that how to use next upgrading technology where we can take safety for us and our future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t also plays vital role on communication too. So, it can not only connect two cit...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...onnect nations. Because of this reason, most of individuals can connect with their friends and rela...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ture, that technology will be different then now. I heard from someone that the very...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...logy. Secondly, it is reality that, now, using the harmful rays in technology whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2347266881 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87240325657 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0606936114 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183558741961 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646383063094 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458433597295 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105764435966 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376382869616 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.