Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
For new immigrants to a foreign country, not knowing what to expect can be daunting. I have personally experienced it for myself as a foreign student in Australia, and it took time to adjust. This essay will discuss on possible ways to address these concerns.
Being in a new country for the first time can be an exciting yet terrifying experience. As we know, different cultures have their understanding of ethics, tradition and ways of living, to name a few. A possible approach to this will be to educate the new immigrants on how to assimilate with the new culture. For example, the government could introduce workshops to assist newcomers in understanding local laws, tolerance to new cultures, and language classes to name a few. This might help the immigrants to gain a better understanding of what they might experience in the new country.
Another way would be to encourage engagement with the local community. This might help the immigrants to settle in more comfortably with the new surroundings and the community. For example, events such as ‘cultural night’ can be organized to enable the immigrants to share their culture with the locals and vice versa to get a better understanding of each other. My own experience in Australia as a foreign student included myself making new friends and being invited to participate in social events which helped to make me more comfortable as a guest in the country.
This essay discussed on how we could improve and address culture shock for immigrants. In my opinion, culture shock is a normal experience for new immigrants, and such steps as described earlier in the essay will help to ease their new experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00355871886 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98656456283 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483985765125 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9713359611 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28395064904 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103646478071 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600122137491 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18672086958 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755969999045 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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