Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, it has become a growing trend to see people who think dancing palys a pivotal role in dancing. As such, there are both merits and demerits, although I am opinion that the former outdo latter. I lay down reasons to support my viewpoint with relevant examples.
There are myriads of argument in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous on is that dancing is a art form which brings people closer and builds a layout for culture. People not only realised the positive impact of dancing such as health body and good relationship with each other, which is essential for culture build up, but also measured the gravity of its relevance. Hence, all these upsides stand people in good stead as far as dance being pivotal part of culture.
There, however, are some drawbacks which can overwhelm the potential benefits of dance. The primary one lies int he fact that people sometime can hurt there body while dancing, which can put cultural aspect in negative light. Another overt of this argument is that people sometime might can get violent because of competition among them, putting negative impact on culture. Hence, it is apparent from aforementioned discussion why people are concerned about dancing as part of culture.
In view of above outlined argument, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, role of dancing in culture formation is too great indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... most conspicuous on is that dancing is a art form which brings people closer and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97844827586 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4475130854 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6963786706 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112662348126 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437914408883 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380685635714 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716252281379 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271500539966 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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