It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
These days, it has become a growing trend to see people borrow money from their friends. As such, it has both merits and demerits, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter. I lay reasons to support my argument with relevant examples.
There are myriads of argument in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that we should always ask friends to help us in our time of need and it is the duty of a friend to help another friend. People not only realised the positive impact of borrowing money from a friend as such it does not have any time constraint and they do not have to pay any interest on the borrowed money, but also measured the gravity of its relevance. Hence, all these upsides put anyone in good stead as far as take loan from friend is concerned.
There, however, are some pitfalls which can easily overwhelm the potential benefit of borrowing money from friends. The primary one lies in the fact that it can damage the friendship. For instance, I had a friends who took money from me, but he did not wanted to pay me back which caused an argument between us and ended our friendship. Hence, it is apparent from aforementioned discussion why many are concerned by borrowing money from a friend.
In view of argument above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of borrowing money from a friend is too great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
...age the friendship. For instance, I had a friends who took money from me, but he did not ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
... who took money from me, but he did not wanted to pay me back which caused an argument...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56451612903 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46420788479 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6567588771 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272568005507 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956275649783 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674626484903 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159178253175 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644958255719 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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