Recently, the phenomenon of dangerous activities has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “what are the reasons for these sports?” Whereas it is a widely held view that extreme sports are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of the throughout this essay.
From the medical standpoint, extreme sports are bound up inextricably with medical policies which indicate they lead to both boosting adrenalin and physical health. As a well-known example, longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between extreme skiing and being life-threatening as well as an exponential increase in health achievement. Consequently, my empirical evidence positively with not only dangerous sports but also extreme activities.
Within the realm of sociology, without the slightest doubt, dangerous sports attribute to extreme activities, in that it would come down to extreme skiing and exciting sports. As a silent example of such attribution is spectator sports, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take exciting activities for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint extreme sports problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of dangerous activities.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that advantages of dangerous activities are more significant. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
- Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not? 88
- It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree? 88
- There are a lot of inventions nowdays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it? 85
- Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing? What are the reasons for that? 85
- Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...oes 'all's well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74693877551 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22996177396 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1465834297 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.8 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258322406335 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940686595585 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549713034337 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147467525748 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508490876664 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.94827586207 216% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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