Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing??What are the reasons for that?
Extreme sports have become a controversial issue among public all around the world. Although these sports are regarded by a considerable number of people as thoroughly both constructive and positive, others hold opponents view. I am inclined to profoundly believe that these activities are entirely beneficial as they could develop brilliant aspects for their adherents.
There are several reasons why some sports including skiing and bungee jumping are advantageous. First and foremost, an array of inhabitants argued that every sport which has plenty of excitement play a pivotal role in our sedentary lifestyle specifically in big cities and urban areas. For instance, if everyone cannot do such sports, they will never overcome their fears. Furthermore, not only do they diminish the depression rate, but also they develop self-confidence. According to new research which has conducted by Tehran university dwellers particularly the youths who have the experience to do these sports have the ability to face up the challenges perfectly.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that these hazardous activities can provide people with various catastrophic points. No sooner had everyone done them, than they comprehended that they are quite risky. Namely, there is a significant amount of time and money annually spent on their negative outcomes such as all of the treatment cost to cure some serious injuries which are the result of them. In addition, due to their specific facilities, they are quite pricey. Hence, it is crystal clear that the more tendency for doing them, the more cost and risky circumstances.
In conclusion, while they might have some demerits, I much prefer experimenting them to doing some dull activities like shopping and playing computer games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38709677419 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87762954337 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663082437276 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.558243404 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141311151483 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460185505159 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411488672347 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846904219271 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228251117459 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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