Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Nowadays, the question of whether consumers should avoid over-packaged products or manufacturers has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the globe. It is a widely held view that biodegradable packaging is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of excess packaging.
From an industrial point of view, the recycling materials are indeed bound to a burden of responsibility, which means they might lead to both harmful chemicals and a significant catalyst for environmental damage. For instance, a group of profound scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between plastic bags and the contamination of the products as well as ending up as litter. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that the cost of wastage is positively correlated with not only retailers but also customers.
Moreover, in marketing terms, advertising is undoubtedly attributable to the printing industry, in that it would lead to overuse of paper, cutting trees, and attractive boxes. A well-known example of such attributions is shopping bills, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken in taking the harm to the ecosystem for granted. Had factory managers eliminated extra layers of plastic in advance, they might have had the opportunity to do environmentally friendly actions. Thus, non-disposable packets could play a significant role in the cost of products.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that alternative options must be taken into consideration, However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Nowadays, the question of whether consumers should avoid over-packaged pr...
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Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed products or manufacturers has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58394160584 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32443089886 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 139.433497537 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686131386861 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2078831728 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994152325186 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338874490436 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475790120322 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055225588641 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592548070039 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 12.6369458128 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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