Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products , or is it the responsibility of producers?
The importance of over packaged product which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while rejcet this notion. The substantial influence of reason has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion, the former latter appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate te positive effect of this trend and thus will lead to be logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain the argument of the most preponderant one stems from the fact that most costomer besides ignore the real threat that plastic waste to the environement. As a result packaged product is one of the changing trend in the modern era. Another aspect of this argument is that in this compitative world producer try their hard best to attract their costomers and over packing is one of most effective factor to attract their costomer. Needless to say all these merits are stand in a good stead.
elaborating my viewpoint, this trend has some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that many big companies that produce thousand of tons over packaged goods a years. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of packaged products.
In conclusion, according to this argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion and drawbacks of packaged products are instrumental indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09442060086 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70108174998 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8774243956 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129607398028 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538288907815 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465480100147 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885633946587 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198128060044 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.