Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products. Give your views any relevant example write your own experience.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals over packaging has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. Some people think that consumers should avoid over packaged products and others insist that it it responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging. In opinion it is the responsibility of consumer as well as producer and I will discuss reason behind this notion in further elaborating paragraphs.
To begin with, over packaging is harmful to environment as well as natural resources. Firstly, producers cut the trees more and more for the production of products so it leads to deforestation. Secondly, plastic and other resources are utilized for the manufacturing of products but due to over packaging it reduce day by day. So producers should avoid over packaged products and they should fill sufficient amount of products into packaging.
On the other hand, consumers should avoid over pakaged products because over packaging increase the price of products as well as it leads to environment pollution. Firstly, consumer refuse over packaged products and they should have complain about over packaged products for the high authorities. Furthermore, they should make other more efforts for refusing the over packaged products.
In conclusion, it the responsibility of consumer as well as producers should avoid over packaging products because it is harmful for environment and consumer.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-12 | khehra mandeep | 70 | view |
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Suggestion: of people
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Suggestion: it
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
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Message: Use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4125 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00517782336 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1764605667 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.25 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378135897744 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175364288733 0.0925447433944 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121506421367 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282119367602 0.151781067708 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260157651466 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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