Do you think extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc are dangerous and should be probihited?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 31.9359605911 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 1207.87684729 67% => OK
No of words: 102.0 242.827586207 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.96078431373 5.00649968141 159% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17797182781 3.92707691288 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.7479634788 2.71678728327 469% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 90.0 139.433497537 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.882352941176 0.580463131201 152% => OK
syllable_count: 135.9 379.143842365 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.5024630542 498% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 812.0 104.977214359 774% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.0 20.9669160288 486% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 67.1 12.6369458128 531% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.67 53.1260098522 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.5 10.9458128079 361% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.07 11.5310837438 261% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.65 8.32886699507 164% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 55.0591133005 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.94827586207 553% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.3980295567 412% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.5123152709 523% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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