Do you think extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc are dangerous and should be probihited?
The importantance of extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. are dangerous and should be prohibited which was always debatable has now become more controversal.The substantial influence of sports like skiing,water rafting etc. are dangerous and should be probihited has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years.It can be said that extreme sports like skiing,water rafting etc should be prohibited.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. But the most conspicious on steam's from the fact that extreme sports like skiing and water rafting if not played well it might cause sports accidents which is dangerous to them. As an illustration if players forget to check and fill the equipment,customs and oxygen then at the time of in needed them due to lak of essential assessories accident may occur.In addition, due to lack of better knowledge and idea about sports like skiing and water rafting players may be frustrated.
Nevertheless, there remain same drawbacks which can certanly overwhelm the potential influence of extreme sports are dangerous and should be probihited but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that, skiing and water rafting sports are useful sports for player which helps in intellactual development as well as to be confident.For instance after playing extreme skiing and water rafting players will be refreshed and they will gain more experience on these sports which helps them to guide for new players.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of the extreme sports like skiing and water rafting etc are dangerous and should be probihited is prominent, although the way extreme sports is dangerious but it helps in career development so it shgould not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.5418719212 218% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21355932203 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82973500038 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467796610169 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.971078969 50.4703680194 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.25 104.977214359 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.875 20.9669160288 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55608967748 0.242375264174 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.337604727421 0.0925447433944 365% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117483602165 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399647713845 0.151781067708 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115219801503 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 12.6369458128 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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