Do you think extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. are dangerous and should be prohibited?
These days there is an ongoing debate between people about extreme sports should be prohibited or not. while it is possible to claim that sports play important role to lead healthy life. my view is that the disadvantages outweigh over advantages. In this essay i shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of argument.
there are several reasons why extreme sports should be prohibited.one of them is that it is very dangerous no assurance at anything in life.it can also be argued with that more chance of getting injury. it should also be taken into the account that extreme sports are very expensive and it needs plan months in advance .For example skydiving is expensive ,bungee jumping needs plan in advance.
Those who argue for extreme sports are good have different view and say it can be actually a good thing. Firstly it is claimed that new experience and sense of achievements. Then there are concerns about extreme sports are helps to get rid from stored negative energy. it will also helps for extreme fitness.
while there is strong arguments on both sides of case,my opinion is that extreme sports are very dangerous so it should be avoided. i would strongly recommend that extreme sports should be avoid when it does not have safety measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87155963303 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45758566396 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9298382932 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2755919685 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985533020046 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774232913716 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173656504391 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468586605849 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.