Do you think that place where the person grew up has an influence on his accomplishments ? Explain with examples.
This has been well said that influences of surrounding impact the learning and attitude of individual. Nurturing in particular environment always provides a platform to person and play a pivotal role in his/her success and failures. Some people believe that place of work influence individual's success and other people argue that people contemplate and praise the skills of individual which can acquire success at any place. In this essay, I shall discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, there are conspicuous and unequivocal reasons why accomplishments of person depend on surrounding. One of them is inspiration which provides enthusiasm which enlighten the individual and fulfill dreams. For example, sports person, if person live in surrounding with other sports person then there will be conversation in field for sports always else other living place link will allow his learning. All amenities in surrounding with own's place have always profound impact of person's success.
On contrary, people argue that place doesn't play any role are right at their place. They argue that actual inspiration come from the courageous background and genes. They believe that attitude and passion of person will play a role even if there no practice sessions in place. In addition, the think that diet has a profound result on individual's performance.
In recapitulate, strong views have discussed for this argument. In my personal opinion, obviously place has imperative affect on person's achievements and nurture of path of success. I will recommend that target can be acquired with steady hard work with pace of patience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, in particular, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36882129278 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82136964014 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2223994542 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204273809191 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658535516444 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482752682693 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123836774502 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348150971208 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.