Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, advertisements are occupying every corner of public places in this world. From advertiser's prospective, it is blatant and conspicuous way to reflect their products in People's eyes. This medium of outlook of their products are becoming more convenient and seduce the customers and have a positive influences on people's lives. This essay will discuss how the advertisements provide several influences in term of advantages.
To start with, ventures require ambiance to reflect their current offers or information of their products. People generally got updates from these advertisements although these solocited promotions not imposing any decision on public. Their view is just to represents by placing some hordings on public assembly points or on social media. People consider to think for these ads in positive ways.
In addition, there are other benefits for customers associated with advertisements and place a accurate competition environment. Firstly, advertisers reduce price to allure customers. Secondly, by taking a single glance of hording people can compare the prices of different competitors. People believe advertisements on public places communicate the latest life style for all commodities. People mention the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In conclusion, as aforementioned this essay discussed impact of advertisements on people lives. I reckon to believe that advertisements play a pivotal role and provide a glance of latest product with attracting prices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7963800905 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21424344858 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9164469444 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179291723554 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730360154859 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710365272934 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120313449547 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170688023675 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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