Do you think that place where the person grw up has an infulence on his accomplishments? Explain with examples
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether there is any effect of area where a person grew up on his achievements or not. This essay agrees that there is such influence on one's accomplishments. This essay will explain how the impact of birth place on his milestones and then discuss with relative examples.
Firstly, the one who reached his goals obviously aware of the best and worst of his own backyard. Any issues or concerns at his birth place will ensure him not to astray from his path towards achieving the target. For instance, an article published in The Hindu last year stated that a lot of young kids from rural villages of India are working towards becoming Indian Administrative Services officers with sole reason to resolve their village problems. Parents, friends and relatives from one's own place will ensure the person know the pains and gains of his own place so he could work towards solving by reaching his goal.
Secondly, the renowned persons who emerged from the same place and got received a huge respect all over the place can have a greater impact on the young kids who born at the same place. The great's success stories that describes their hard work and diligence to achieve their goal creates a positive vibration among the people of the same place. For example, my relative's son whose hometown is a factory for producing soldiers for Indian Army has inspired him to choose army as his goal and he is currently working to achieve his goal.
To recapitulate, there has always been hometown influence on people's accomplishments. This influence certainly led the people to right path and thus become a famous personalities and do good in return for their homelands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'greats'' or 'great's'?
Suggestion: greats'; great's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86440677966 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58865444945 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0493240003 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213758375731 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776294453162 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556927972343 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128439382138 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611273626561 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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