Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with examples.
A person's accomplishments doesn't always depends on the place where he grew but there would be some influence. It depends on the individuals and their interests, hobbies and goals. I niether agree nor disagree that the place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments.
Firstly, a person can dream big and accomplish his goals even though the place he grew up is nowhere related to. A small town villager can become a successful person and inspiration to many by working hard and keep thriving towards his goals. For example, a boy who once a paper boy, later became a great scientist and president of India, Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam. Mr. Kalam was born and brought up in a small town called Rameswaram in Tamilnadu, India. Though, there were no proer amenities in his school and locality, he developed his interests towards studying rocket science from his chidhood and became a great scientist irrespective of the place where he grew up. Similarly, the founder of Apple computer company, Steve Jobs was a college drop out once. While doing a part time in a computer lab, he gained knowledge about computers and went on to become a founder of Apple products and a billionaire. There are so many inspirational personalities become successful and accomplished thier with no relevance to the where they brought up.
Secondly, there also some other famous personalities who were influenced by the place they grew up. It may be because of the people got surrounded by or the conditions of the locality where he grew can influece a person. For example, a politician's son becoming a next geneeration of politician. A hero's son becoming a next generation's hero. Alternatively, a person from successful family background can become a failure. It always has an influence on them as they grew up among those surroundings.
To conclude, It has both possibilities that the place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments. But it always depends on the individual interests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 335.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00895522388 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03606303794 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5773993489 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347076967586 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111232845838 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121541558708 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261404181414 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714643648956 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.