Does a certain type of music affect young children's learning agree/disagree?
Music is act as stress booster and diverts the mind of person. In the past scenario music was totally related to culture and traditions but in these days it is not like that one. There is both positive and negative influence on young children. Although I think that listening music has more bad effect on youngsters today. I am going to explain in forthcoming paragraphs.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that it distracts the youngsters from their study and they lag behind in exam and performance in school on daily basis. Also, it affects the personality of young children for example they imitate the dress and other things of person of act in song as a model. Ultimately, this thing make a bad image of child in front of society and they loss their respect.
Further reinforcing my views, there are remain restrict to one task for example they spend their lots of time to listen music. Due to continue listening of music hinder their growth and they do nt develop multitask abilities. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that children do not obey command of parents and remain busy in their own work. Hence, it is apparent why I favor this opinion.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that music put bad influence on new generation due to its low quality and continues listening of songs by youngsters also create lots of problems in their personal and social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, as to, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69803921569 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50228653605 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3767275595 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112987746081 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412663174778 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430590095643 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704498188903 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370152476237 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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