Education is important as it teaches ethics and life value.what is your opinion?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , thanks
...lossal upsurge in education is important,thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art tec...
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Suggestion: , moderation
... ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology,moderation and globalization.There is a widespread...
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...technology,moderation and globalization.There is a widespread worry that this would l...
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...this would lead to a myriad of concerns.In my opinion,this apprehension is unwarra...
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...ad to a myriad of concerns.In my opinion,this apprehension is unwarranted and so shou...
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...luge of arguments in favor of my stance.The most preponderant one is that in order ...
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Suggestion: , education
...t one is that in order to get relaxation,education is important and its play a crucial rol...
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...d its play a crucial role in human life.Not only has the modern fast era brought a ...
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...ot of opportunities all across the globe,but it has also provided various facilities...
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Suggestion: Needless
...ke our lives comfortable and convenient.Needless to say,all these merits stand people in...
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...mfortable and convenient.Needless to say,all these merits stand people in good stead...
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... these merits stand people in good stead,when it comes to broadening their horizons. ...
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... problem government like effective steps,which are not remote or complicated but acces...
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...plicated but accessible and practicable.Besides,awareness programs should be organised ...
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...d but accessible and practicable.Besides,awareness programs should be organised to make pe...
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...d to make people aware about this issue.Last but not least, local councils and state...
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... the necessary initiatives cumulatively.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favor of...
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...necessary initiatives cumulatively.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favor of ed...
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... In view of the arguments outlines above,one can conclude that the potential benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55111111111 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.08251677399 2.71678728327 150% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.5024630542 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.071700242 50.4703680194 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 312.25 104.977214359 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.25 20.9669160288 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195246717922 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111864328583 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485091247095 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111864328583 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485091247095 0.0609392437508 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 12.6369458128 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 53.1260098522 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.9458128079 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.4 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.94827586207 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.3980295567 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.5123152709 266% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.