Agree or disagree with getting married before school education and job secured?
There is a widespread concern about early marriage and childhood labour because parents in Asia used to adopt the trend of their forefathers. In lower class families education in school and college is not considered an important part of life. People in villages focused on early marriage of girls as they have to look after their parents and other older persons in the family. The main purpose of the marriage for girls is to serve others while for boys to support their father.
To some extent, in cities people focus on education and job for boys before marriage as they have to run a family. If a person is getting a handsome amount of salary and educated then only he can fulfill the demands and basic needs of his family. So in my point of view, it is very necessary to be educated enough to get a good job and reputation in society. An educated person can not only play a great role in success and better development of his family but also takes part in the betterment of his society and growth of the country.
To conclude, the government of Australia is taking great initiative in educating its people against the negative impacts of early marriage. People are encourged to follow the rules and regulations for the prosperity, efficiency and positive development of their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...nd of their forefathers. In lower class families education in school and college is not ...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in cities people focus on education and job for boys before marriage as they hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71238938053 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56761108308 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561946902655 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6785608378 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.5 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136166527738 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560063777434 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568535994641 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812569794753 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654933703595 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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