Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone, irrespective of personal wealth. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone, irrespective of personal wealth. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Education is a crucial element for development in life of a individual and also a basic human right. Some people opine that it should be delivered to everyone for free no matter the wealth a person aquire. I my opinion this proposition merits little consideration and should be rejected. This essay will discuss my view point and thus will lead to a reasoned conclusion.

There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, free education to every individual will put colossal of pressure on government. Not only abundant of budget will be required to pay teachers, but also will deplete financial help to other essential fields. For instance, giving free education to people who are self reliant will cost government lot of money, as no revenue is being generated, therefore result in drop in economy of that country. Needless to say free education should be provided only to people living below poverty line, instead of every single individual.

Another key justification for upholding this nation is that, there are several other sectors like healthcare transportation to name some which will get severely affected by this act. Providing free of cost education can hinder the growth in these areas. As an illustration, people will get educated but will be deprived of other essential facilities. Hence is quite apparent why majority of people are against free education for all.

From what has been discussed above, one can concluded that providing free education to all will cause serious consequences which are too dire to be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...no revenue is being generated, therefore result in drop in economy of that countr...
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...ences which are too dire to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76323096442 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.548147019 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227560542465 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926615222399 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632944769613 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149074840325 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537580421006 0.0609392437508 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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