One of the biggest threat looming over the world is the environmental pollution in many forms. On one side stands a perspective that it is the responsibility of every individual to contribute in a cleaner and non polluted environment, however there is a group of people who believe that pollution control is beyond the individual efforts and also need serious intervention by the government. This essay will discuss how the government and people can action mutually to control the pollution.
It is eminent that goverments across the globe take pollution as a global threat and come up with policies and strategies to control it. They need to implement stringent rules against everything that threaten the environment and cause pollution. They need to spread awareness among individual about the ways to reduce the pollution. For example, government should pass ordinance to stop the electricity production through coal, burning of rubbers and other harmful elements that causes extreme pollution shall be banned with immediate effect.
It is also the responsibility of the comman man to control the pollution. We need to limit our uses of cars and consumption of fossil fuels to promote healthy environment. Neither individual nor any government can alone solve the pollution problem alone. In conclusion, thus it is important that government comes up with more strict ordinances and individual tries their best to curb the pollution by changing their lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 5.75862068966 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33620689655 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97611128936 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2219351633 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.545454545 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121936284994 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430632678633 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355726177664 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081930806583 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00898892613964 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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