The environment we are living in, is in danger due to various problems. So who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organizations or each individual?
These days, it has become a growing trend to see colossal upsurge in the amount of pollution in almost all parts of the world, be it impoverished or affluent nations. There are many factors which account for why this is happening. I am of the opinion this situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken.
There are a myriad of consequences of pollution in the world. The most conspicuous one is that pollutants from industries and other sources contribute to deteriorating the environment. Not only do they have an adverse impact on the ecology/ecosystem but they also cause people to suffer from a range of diseases. It hardly needs mention; environmental pollutions have far reaching impact on ecosystem.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most significant ones are not remote or complicated, but accessible and practicable. Primarily, the governments should introduce stringent laws and regulations to ensure that factories and manufacturers use ecofriendly measures in producing goods. Besides, the international organizations can raise funds and thus help underprivileged nation to fight off pollution in every sphere. Last but not least, an awareness program to educate people of the harmful effects of pollution can also be initiated.
From what has been discussed, one can conclude that the situation that has stemmed from pollution can be successfully remedied, provided that the aforementioned measures are taken.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...tive measures are taken. There are a myriad of consequences of pollution in the wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43231441048 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23156496871 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8927687886 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0486732970307 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165293081344 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141436819416 0.071462118173 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294891519685 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114163213162 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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