The environment we are living is in danger due to various problems. So who do you think should be responsible for solving it? Is it government, organisations or each individual ?
Environment is not formed by an individual, but by a group or a society of people. Although the lifestyle has changed a lot these days compared to our ancient times, we still have no defined methodology to keep our surroundings hygenic. The change is expected to be initiated from every single person of the community. This essay discusses about the importance, roles and responsiblites of individuals in keeping our environment neat.
Firstly looking forward towards the aspects which the envirnment is majorly affected in is that, water, air, and land. Water is getting spoiled due to reasons like mixing wastages from dying industries in the river, throwing garbages in the ponds and lakes, in addition of mixing chemicals from the factories in running water. This is harmul for both humans, animals and birds as well. Smoke from the automobiles, or any factories that produce things like cement or any place which comsume more chemical products are damaging for the surroundings. Usage or placstic is the maiden reason for polluting the land, because this substance do not decompose with nature and causes risk both on the surface and underground. Also people have less practice in harvesting rainwater, which results in decreased ground water level. The mineral content which helps for farming has also reduced these days is a notable point.
Despite on having lots of NGOs, private organisations and even govenment take more positive steps to bring the environment out of danger, it is the responsibility if each and every person of the society to follow and maintain cleanliness. Importance and responsiblity of a single person's cleanliness should be educated at the primary level, that brings up a healthier community. Planting more trees aside of roads makes the streets pollution free. Avoiding plastic and harmful items for daily life would help us in enhancing our present and future.
To put it in nutshell, i would like to conclude, we have enough number or organisations to educate and preech the public about cleanliness and neat enviromment. But it is the previlege of every single person of the society to start following in keeping the society heathy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...mportance and responsiblity of a single persons cleanliness should be educated at the p...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'streets'' or 'street's'?
Suggestion: streets'; street's
...ing more trees aside of roads makes the streets pollution free. Avoiding plastic and ha...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1207.87684729 151% => OK
No of words: 354.0 242.827586207 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15536723164 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81668308429 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 139.433497537 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607344632768 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 379.143842365 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8331876507 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.352941176 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134274376669 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365495877687 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310537313229 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07420647517 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305367096682 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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