The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?
Air and noise pollution are some of the enviornmental problems faced by all of us today. The problems are occuring due to increase in traffic, population and industrial activity. These problems can be solved by implementing adequate measures and a collabarative effort between the government and society.
To begin with, increase in industrial activity is a major cause of decreasing air quality. For instance, in Kanpur, Dhanbad air quality is so low that people have to cover their face whenever they are stepping out from their houses. Therefore, it is important for the government to implement methods for improving oxygen quality. Additionally, people should step forward to increase green cover in their society by planting more and more trees. Thus, air quality will be improved holistically in the region.
Secondly, traffic is a major problem in many cities across the world. It has significantly increased air pollution in the urban areas due to rise in number of vehicles on city roads. Therefore, the regime should promote use of public transport and give incentives to people who extensively use it. For instance, a person using public transport for 6 months continuously will get certain days of transportation on discount. Additionally, people can participate in car pooling to reduce traffic. Hence, it is clearly visible that people and government can work together in solving the environmental issues.
All in all, it’s a teamwork as we are all in the mess together. We simply cannot afford to damage the future of our next generations. We must put collective efforts to in order to save the planet.
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- The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?The environment we live in is in danger due to various global problems. What are the underlying causes 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
Air and noise pollution are some of the enviornmental problems faced by all of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21292775665 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98748516115 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3498150878 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0524911269616 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.01731153801 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186441154316 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0345358042433 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018586273257 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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