Marketing strategy for big companies should be placed on offer and discounts, and in what ways this impact on their reputation.
Nowadays, the discounts of prices in big companies have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " is there any advantagous in it or not?". It is a widely held the view that offer is highly beneficial, whereas I tent to believe that one must carefully wiegh up the pros and cons of it.
To begin with there are several reasons why I believe that the big companies should provide costumers with approporiate discounts. First and foremost is that, these brand are able to sell their outfits that were not able tobabsorbe people's attention, so with good offer they would gain more money to peovide new colletions for customers. In addition, a attractive discount for a less famouse brand can gain more individuals attention and this could be a best advertisment for that brand..
However, there is little room doubt that many factories provide offers to cheat buyers. That is to say, stories merly give the offer for those etuffs that are out- of- date and old. Fore example, a group of reputable social activitist, working in a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal studu between two brands which provide offer for costumers on other not. Therefor, the result was statistically significant and revealed that, those who give discounts was three times provide less quality stuff.
To recapiculate, I firmly believe that, although there are some advantegeous on discounts I prefer to purchase the brands that have good quality and prices not just for offers. However, every garden have some weed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of prices in big companies have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... colletions for customers. In addition, a attractive discount for a less famouse ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... for a less famouse brand can gain more individuals attention and this could be a best adve...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...individuals attention and this could be a best advertisment for that brand.. H...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ld be a best advertisment for that brand.. However, there is little room doubt ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, whereas, in addition, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08076923077 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72924930616 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8174499866 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171540269364 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577023577086 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431537113628 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874839555615 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605376565447 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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