Nowadays, many young people are interested to leave their homes and travel to other countries or cities in order to find a better job or university for studying. Although many people believe that there are several good reasons to leave home at
an early age, I believe that children should stay at their home at least age twenty-five to become more mature to make a better decision for their lives.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I believe children should not leave their home at an early age. First and foremost is that culture shock is the most important issue that may annoy individuals in cities or countries which result in depression. In addition, leaving home in order to study in more prestigious university put a huge burden on parents shoulders that is impossible for many less wealthy families in small cities or rural areas. Finally leaving alone in another city may put juveniles in jeopardy as result of drug use or drinking too much alcohol with other same ages. Therefore, children should stay with their families and leave with them.
On the other hand, there is little room doubt that there are numerous positive features for individuals to leaving abroad. Firstly, in a modern society, the one is more success to find a lucrative job if they have a university degree and studied in more famous universities. Secondly, children learn to stand on their own feets and become more independent person which help them to be a better parent for their children.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the disadvantages of leaving home at an early age far outweigh the advantages. As every garden may have some weeds children should be free to make decision for their future
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...amilies in small cities or rural areas. Finally leaving alone in another city may put j...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88316151203 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53638977827 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7124591503 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249299633394 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992841621776 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730496952839 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154902667167 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507906553702 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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